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A Beautiful Disaster by ~lisarose:iconlisarose:

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I walk slowly,
The route I always take
Something is different
I follow a trail of white dove feathers
A beautiful path
Fluffy white feathers of peace floating by
A faint smell of petrol in the air
The sun is bright and the wind is calm
The feathers of peace lead me
This bird was not of peace
A fallen angel
That fell into a moving vehicles windscreen
The vehicle swerved and hit the family car
The family car was, carrying a mother and two children
Two people lay dead.
The bird of peace/fallen angel lay squashed
Feathers floating, painting a picture.
Disguising the disaster.
The street is silent
Sadness falls.
©2006-2009 ~lisarose
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Author's Comments

This is a poem of something i actually saw about a month ago, its been stuck in my head for a while. slightly sick but its true, this is just my interpretation of it and my feelings.

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~Keapsixteen Apr 12, 2006, 7:54:45 AM
Oh wow. That would be freaky. I'd hate to see something like that.

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~lisarose Apr 12, 2006, 7:57:02 AM
It was a bit freaky. when i saw all the fluffy white feathers i though how beautiful and i felt so calm and happy. and then i turn the corner and it was horrific.
Thanks for looking at my stuff x

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Lost in my dreams, a whole world of my own.
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~Keapsixteen Apr 12, 2006, 7:58:36 AM
I don't know how anyone could get over seeing something like that. I didn't even see it and now it's stuck in my head. lol

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~I have a story to tell. And I may not know how to say it, but it's worth every breath.~
~You can turn your back on me, but please don't ever leave.~
(\_/)
(^^)copy if u have found someone u will spend forever w/
c(")(")
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~lisarose Apr 12, 2006, 8:02:24 AM
hmmmm i just accept death. i guess im odd. i feel sad about it. and i think its all strange and ironic because it was a dove. im not sure if 2 people died or not i sort of exagerated on that bit, but 2 people had to go to hospital. i just wanted it to seem more dramatic... im not a bad person- honest :(

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Lost in my dreams, a whole world of my own.
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~Keapsixteen Apr 12, 2006, 8:07:48 AM
lol Naw, we all do that. :blush:

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~I have a story to tell. And I may not know how to say it, but it's worth every breath.~
~You can turn your back on me, but please don't ever leave.~
(\_/)
(^^)copy if u have found someone u will spend forever w/
c(")(")
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~JoeD-rtman Apr 12, 2006, 8:44:38 AM
that is awesome lise...really movin

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~lisarose Apr 12, 2006, 9:04:39 AM
he he he :shh:

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Lost in my dreams, a whole world of my own.
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