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i cant  believe
i could let this happen

i feel lost and without a cause

is there any point in what i am doing?

following day by day
never knowing or caring
just looking for an end...

dazed and unsure
efortless and pointless

carrying on just to please every one else
to please you.

lost cause.

you made me bleed,
are you suprised to see im real?
©2004-2009 ~lisarose
:iconlisarose:

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this was just how i was feeling a couple of weeks ago. i was under alot of stress because of college and stuff. i was slightly suicidal

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:icons1lenc3r:
mmhh... I really like yer poetry. n1! Keep it up ;)

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Some born to win, some born to loose
What fate may come, only time can tell
Better to live in sin than nothing else to choose
Servant In Heaven, King In Hell
:iconlisarose:
thanks :)

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Lost in my dreams, a whole world of my own.
:iconpsychogalactic:
i really like the last line the best
:heart:
hope you're feeling better now :hug:

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"King illegal forest to pig wild kill in it a is!"
:iconlisarose:
awwh thanks, yeh im better now, it was written a while ago now, ive grown up a bgit and deal with most situations better x thanks for caring :P ur cool x :juggle:

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Lost in my dreams, a whole world of my own.
:iconpsychogalactic:
well at least when you're coping so well you can vent through ...
hmmm...
a creative medium. i think that explains it. yes?
:)
and yes i'm the coolest ;P
talk later :heart:

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"King illegal forest to pig wild kill in it a is!"
:iconlisarose:
yeh i guess... i kinda just live in a world of my own now where everything it beautiful and great... i have to reconect with emotions and reality to write poetry.. i dont like to because most of my poems are negative... so i get upset... so i stay happy, and i dont sumbit that often... but when i do my poems are awesome!!!! YEAH!!!k maybe not but i enjoy it :P

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Lost in my dreams, a whole world of my own.
:iconpsychogalactic:
i'm kinda the same. i live in my head a lot. i'm a big daydreamer, my head is always in the clouds. and then sometimes i feel really sad and down when i get back to reality. i vent using photography or listening to music. i'd never do poetry. the fact someone might read and understand how i feel terrifies me! so its good you're able to share. i could never do it. i'm a huge liar... heheh.

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"King illegal forest to pig wild kill in it a is!"
:iconlisarose:
haha, i wouldnt worry. i cant write my problems down, but i cant be face to face to someone and tell them... i would just break down. heres cool bcoz i feel safe, and i feel that people do understand, which cool. :P im loving this batman emoticon thing its the best :batman: and the :juggle: hehe

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Lost in my dreams, a whole world of my own.

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